Heaven Sequence









2 comments:

Michelle Moger said...

I love how the ending is working as well as the beginning...however I don't quite understand what is going on in the 4 panels in the 4th image.

gela said...

i love how the ending is working as well! hmm.. i think there are several slight staging stuff maybe i'd like to suggest... like... where it's a wide shot of ecks silhouette in the clouds... and.. maybe her comming up from the clouds in the first set of panels is a little strange... is she shooting up? or being blown up sort of like.. following a wind current with a flowing rhythm to it? (i thought she was following a current? and not shooting up? o_O)

ooother than that~ the ending works well! =DD