Basic Title Design

Rough mock-up for title/correction. I like the typewriter vs marker, though the marker should be messier. Used a default marker brush in Painter. I feel it's important to be able to read both the original text and the correction clearly.


eunzi kim said...

it IS important!
buuut i feel like that default brush has an air of cheapness to it. how about something with a bit of texture, make it thinner... annnd... scratch the words in??? sort of... (actually... maybe even exactly) like the second perpetual pictures logo? but.. more in ecks writing.