I am in pain.
her is my stuff.
ecks in the classroom.
Posted by Henry Lidstone at Monday, November 10, 2008
Labels: CHARACTER - Ms. Ecks, STYLE
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I am in pain.
her is my stuff.
Posted by Henry Lidstone at Monday, November 10, 2008
Labels: CHARACTER - Ms. Ecks, STYLE
6 comments:
The general bendiness of her torso and how fluidly her head and limbs attach to it works well. I find it a bit peculiar that there is such a large curve in the fold of her arm, really seems to suggest huge bones. Make sure she's not about to flash the children please, haha.
I think this works great as far as "flatness" goes. Maybe next time try to explore a more angular approach? Especially with her hair, feet... Like these pointy edges she has to keep the children away.
I actually really like the roundness and lack of jegged edges and such. Seems like it would be fun to animate and we can do some nice fluid animation as well.
i will be as frank as possible about the design, but please dont' take it personally. just trying to say what's on my mind, and how i envision it. doesn't mean i want to enforce it. just my opinion. =D
her lines are awkward. in the sense that, it's an odd mesh of structure and "flatness" to this design.
i like where ur going with this, and trying. and i also know that you're used to drawing characters with a lot of volume and structure.
for the purpose of our film tho, i believe there are other ways of implementing structure without doing it with line - maybe more shapes? i like how there is a sense of fluidity with this, and some structure you're trying to go for, but i feel like she still doesn't have much of a spine. like.. she looks sort of looks jello-y?
overall tho, i like how ur trying out the design from the funpak, but for me personally, maybe u can push the design/style even more?
her shoes also have a "volume" - like structure which maybe u can do without the "volume" lines... maybe using perspective with flat lines more?? i'm not sure how i can explain this... without confusing/offending you too much. i'm sorry - no offence to your wonderful art. nice work tho =D
I like that this is fluid. I think to make it look flatter you could probably eliminate the more form-defining internal lines (on her left arm, for instance).
Her dress is freakily short.
I think less-defined shapes for shoes would be better. Something pointier and flatter, I believe Angela mentioned that. Like bendy triangles.
I like the plain circles for earrings, with no attachment to anything -- a nice graphic detail.
Maybe add bit of straights against curves, to create variety in the form
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